Warrior Princess

Aw, go easy on the poor kid, you guys! There, there, dear. I liked it. Purple = amazingness. My favorite color of all time.

Pure genius, Snoink. (Dang, I love your username lol.)

Well this is gonna be a really lame review, but I thought it was great! Really sweet and sexy, a weird but evocative comination. Thumbs up!

Wow, thanks everyone! I'm glad you liked it, thanks for making it a featured work! :D

Okay, this poem made about as much sense as my 11-year-old brother's subconcious ravings when he talks in his sleep. I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!

I figured I might have to explain this....ilyaeelz seemed to be the only one who caught on a little to the poem's double meaning. It's actually the polar opposite of ...

How dare you say the poem is bad??!! Methinks that's a bit uncalled for. It's not bad at all, just somewhat tangled. Stream of concsiousness rarely focuses on what one ...

I'm thrilled that my fellows writers like my little sample chapter. I do apologize for the somewhat confusing plot; I guess my explanation at the beginning didn't avail much. :( ...

Okay. This was good. Emotionally painful but yet very enjoyable. I must say the subject's a bit cliche, you know, the whole emo-girl-whom-no-one-understands thing, but you presented it well.

Wow. This was beautiful and disturbing at the same time, rather like Edgar Allan Poe. *wink* Also, it was evocative, so I can't really critique you much. :)

This is a pretty powerful poem. I can relate to the situation described; revenge is a great feeling, but then you just can't bring yourself to do it. I can't ...

I guess if you're terrible at keeping secrets, it's best to just go ahead and say so, eh? Haha. I liked this, as I liked its sequel. It's a little ...

First of all, LOSE THE EXCLAMATION POINTS. They are cheesy. The poem could use some spicing up, it's a bit cliche as it is. Try expressing the feeling in a ...

This is very beautiful and colorful, presenting a wonderful array of imagery. I can't really find anything to nitpick. I liked this line: "Lightning flashes, scarring the sky" A very ...

It's hard to realy review a haiku, since they are SO unbearably short. I didn't quite get it, but then there wasn't much to get. I think you did do ...